Please abbreviate the lead section. General information on how sputtering works should go on the Sputter deposition page.
Topic on Talk:Lab 18-1
Lead too long
Please note the Discussion for Lab 18-2, "Please expand the lead section to include a more thorough introduction to the tool" Kjowen.
This is basically the same information that passed after getting this note form you.
The length looks good now, it would be good if we could get a link or two in it though.